Sone people like to spent money on look, fashion,cars and other things. Whereas, other are save money for their future endeavours. Discuss both sides.
it is an incontrovertible fact that nowadays few masses expenditures related to their appearance and luxurious items. Whereas, other saving the money for future time.this essay examines the both view points and rendered my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, in this fashionable era look fashionable and being attractive is most important. Firstly, it is increase the self-confidence and people are taking the supporting belief from the others. Secondly, looks and personality is essential for some job such as, in business and acting. For example, if the person has not good personality that cannot do work in films because the attractive looks are attracting audience more. The last but not least, to buying the expensive things act as a status symbol in the society. So, today people are spending more money on fashion and gadgets.
On the other hand, many lobby are saving the money for future endeavours because they are not materialistic and are securing their future. The farmers and builders are more particular about money than fashion. To instance, a farmer save the money because they can use this saving for next yielding. As well as they can used it in their critical situation like in weather disasters and for diseases treatment.
In conclusion, to spending money on fashion and luxury items are not wasting because, life is very short and in that people can enjoy their life. but saving some money have people in their critical situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14876033058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73684770486 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5944574441 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38700758331 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122363603469 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845674134703 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219981184703 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472272798151 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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