The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below displays the production and consumption of electricity by the top ten countries in 2014.

Overall, in 2014 the production of electricity in some countries bigger than consumption while in Germany the consumption of electricity considerable than the production of electricity.

In contrast to other countries, China has better production and consumption of electricity. It is about 5398 billion kWh production and 5322 billion kWh consumption of electricity. On the other hand, the difference between the USA and Russia is colossal. For example, the difference between Russia and Japan smaller than 200. In fact, that contrast betwixt Japan and India is minimal too.

On the one hand, Germany has a negative difference between production and consumption. It is about -56 billion kWh. In contrast to other countries, that has a positive change betwixt production and consumption. On the other hand, Canada, France, Brazil, Korea has smaller consumption than 500 billion kWh while Germany has 582.5 billion kWh. Besides, Canada has a bigger production in billion kWh than in other countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 386, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ides, Canada has a bigger production in billion kWh than in other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while, for example, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49710982659 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05562276776 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42774566474 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4240445344 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190638725239 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100100406844 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144863151528 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208265966203 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179035127998 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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