Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter.
*explain what has happened
*describe the bag and its contents
*say what you would like them to do about it
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to my baggage that I left on the plane last week.
My name is Tomasz Zawadzki and last week I was flying back from my holiday to London. My flight details are arriving time 9.45 pm on London’s airport, flight number is NB4560. I was in rush the time when I was leaving the plane because, of an information about my dad’s accident that I received just before boarding. I realized about the missing back just after few days, when I was looking for my photo ID.
Thus, my bag is in red color with big gold button on top of the lid. Inside the bag I have many personal belongings such as my holiday credit card, my photo ID, sunglasses, jumper and old watch.
I really appreciate if you could call me or send me a message if you have found my bag. My phone number is 567987456.
I humbly thankful in forward.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
... of the lid. Inside the bag I have many personal belongings such as my holiday credit card, my phot...
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Line 27, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, thus, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 1373.03311258 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54802259887 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42798541057 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 419.366225166 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0213902134 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 110.228320801 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214310243859 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078985305044 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743015731509 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121731373067 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084458774226 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.3589403974 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 53.8541721854 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.0289183223 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 63.6247240618 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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