commutes

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commutes

The graph gives information about the average number of people commutes each day by car, bus and train in the UK.
It is clear from the graph that the figure for car and train had an upward trend and the reverse is true with Bus. The figure for car remains at the highest position and outnumbers the others.
In 1970, there were nearly 5 million commuters using the car followed by 4 million and 2.5 million people choosing Bus and Train, respectively. Over a period of 30 years, the fondness of the car rose slightly, then witnessed a large increase in the following 30 years. Besides, in the same period, the statistic of UK inhabitant using train and car each day had the same pattern.
The figure for the train is predicted to be at around 5 million people, ranks the second position in the top popular transports in the UK. Over the period show, the number of people choosing Bus decreased modestly and is likely to be the lowest, at about 3 million in 2030 and should become the least popular vehicle.

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2019-10-31 Thang Nguyen Duc 73 view

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bus'
Suggestion: To bus
...million and 2.5 million people choosing Bus and Train, respectively. Over a period ...
^^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bus'
Suggestion: To bus
...iod show, the number of people choosing Bus decreased modestly and is likely to be ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53551912568 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36289359623 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6040644652 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867588180387 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438406501188 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764799849884 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697365674295 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795501310525 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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