Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, with rapid growth of urban life people try to spend their holidays far from hustle and bustle in cities. Usually they arrange trips to go to the nature for relaxing and gathering enough energy for the rest of the life. Among them people make a plan to travel to unusual places such as desert or mountainous area even if going to these kinds of places always have themselves difficulties. This essay will shed some light on this subject and analyse the positive and negative points of view while extend my partial support to the negative points before arriving at a conclusion.
The nature of the humans has been wanted to explore new things and places. In fact, they want to know more and more about their neighbors. One of the benefits of travelling to intact places is not only can they make unforgettable remembrance of their trip but also, they may have more tranquil in that zones which are free of any urban parasites. Spending time in not well-known environment can free people’s Soul and improve their mental health. Moreover, finding Uncharted lands has direct effect on economic grow of every country. I mean that tourism industry can be improved by recognisability these natures, because more people travel to that places for visiting many new things that are exclusive just for that area. Of course, they spend lots of money that help to rise up financial situation of each country. Visiting these locations, furthermore, will be an affordable, because nobody is started to run a business on that places. For instance, tourists do not need to pay for parking or camping or even do not need pay more money for entrance. people usually sleep in Tent so accommodation is free too.
On the other hand, travelling to untouched nature can destroy the ecosystem by constructing new buildings or deforestation in big scale. It is clear dad soil and water will be polluted by human activities, consequently demolishing the environment is the first drawbacks of travelling to intact nature. In addition, these places usually are not very safe, I should mention that tourists are always in danger due to burglars and thieves. Offenders know that the security guard of government cannot covered these zones so they try to abuse of this opportunity to attack to travelers. It can really have a negative report for other tourists and may reduce the rate of visitors. In principle new places suffer from lack of welfare facilities, therefor, spending time in those areas is a little hard. Individuals should prepare everything during the holidays such as cooking their own food by traditional ways on fire or should sleep in a sleeping bags or even in some special area they should travel by horses, camels or elephants which are a little unusual but interesting.
At the conclusion, in my front of view, humans are really selfish and want to discover everything and use them in bad ways, while the earth and Environment is not just for them, next generation and even other creature have to use them too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1030, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to pay'?
Suggestion: to pay
... parking or camping or even do not need pay more money for entrance. people usually...
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Line 5, column 1059, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...o not need pay more money for entrance. people usually sleep in Tent so accommodation ...
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Line 9, column 329, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...ntact nature. In addition, these places usually are not very safe, I should mention that to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, while, for instance, i mean, in addition, in fact, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 513.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91617933723 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66959473549 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0090901579 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3181818182 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18462922021 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482789871679 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569749382127 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955672573632 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601666071905 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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