Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a
successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after
school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some undergraduates are often in a quandary about whether to keep on their studies or not. While there are some benefits of getting a job straight after finishing school, I would argue that it would be the best option to go to the university or college.
There some reasons for the belief that working after graduation is beneficial . Firstly, many young people usually have desire to earn money as soon as possible. In this way, they will become more mature and live independently without their parents support.Secondly, people who choose to get a job instead of continuing to study can have chance to gain work experience and more practical skills necessary to fulfil their chosen profession .This may lead to a promotion and successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is better to go on studying at university or college. As qualification will be required for some occupations. For example, no one want a doctor without any relevant degree to treat their diseases.As the result,university graduates may access to more job opportunities, and they tend to gain higher salaries than those with no qualification. Furthermore, the job market now has become increasingly competitive and many good-qualified students sometime apply for just one position in a company. Therefore, it would be disadvantaged for youngsters who do not have a qualification when applying for jobs.
In conclusion, while it is good to get a job straight after school , i believe that going to university or college is a better route to a successful career
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19409988404 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8924331842 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257553828055 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105228105026 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118490969477 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189219511067 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10960868173 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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