Write about the following topic:
Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The future of next industry will be depending on how young generation will be. Children need to know what they want to do before they choose the university or college. Some people believe that the right one to choose young people's future is their own, but the other thinks that parents need to help them for choosing a suitable place and situation for their entire life. In this essay, I will describe both of the views and gives some real cases.
In 20 century, some teens feel that they can choose what they want to do freely. However, I think there are some benefits and disadvantages for finding way for their future. If they can choose the exactly what they want to do based on their own experiences and skills, they can put all the effort to become the champion and successful in the industry. In addition, when they create the decision, they do not know the real situation and the challenges in the job industries. This thing can make young generation feel depressed when they know the exact situation not as great as their imagination.
On the other hand, parents can give some advice for them to choose the best and most suitable one. Our father and mother already know the real situation of the industry based on their own experiences and from other people. Both of them can lead and give the best path to do the goals for becoming the most successful ones. Although some of the children would not satisfied with the choices because sometimes parents give the idea is not based on their children's passion, this can create pressure for the young generation when they on the way to make it.
To sum up, I believe both of ways is great for the future. However, I prefer to combine both ways to get the most suitable and best way. The young generation can ask their parents about the real situation and ask their parents opinion about their dreams. By doing this situation parents and give the finest way to catch their children's dreams without giving any pressure for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 9, column 364, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...Although some of the children would not satisfied with the choices because sometimes pare...
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Line 9, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration when they on the way to make it. To sum up, I believe both of ways is gre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i think, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65536723164 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26355634312 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432203389831 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7395969226 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299976411871 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111536635416 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976321226195 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217129622174 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751925349349 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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