The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In this report, I'm going to describe two graphs .

Both graphs depicts the Activity of UK students
after ther did bachelors or masters .

Overall, both but different level of students
opting for higher study increased .

For Bachelors, majority of students opted to do Higher studies while these numbers declined for those students who interested in doing part time job, exactly 17,735 . Although, there is large number of unemployment, yet , voluntary worker students are only thirty five thousand.

For Masters, most of students choose to get higher studies so these students were in great numbers, exactly 2,725 . Along with students who did part time jobs , there is large number of unemployed students, which is 2,535 and 1,625 .
Small numbers of students who did voluntary work , which is 345 .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this report, Im going to describe two graphs . Both...
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...to describe two graphs . Both graphs depicts the Activity of UK students aft...
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...nts after ther did bachelors or masters . Overall, both but different level of...
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...ll, both but different level of students opting for higher study increased . ...
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...ents opting for higher study increased . For Bachelors, majority of stude...
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...eased . For Bachelors, majority of students opted to do Higher studies whil...
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Suggestion: part-time
... those students who interested in doing part time job, exactly 17,735 . Although, there i...
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...d in doing part time job, exactly 17,735 . Although, there is large number of unem...
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...ere is large number of unemployment, yet , voluntary worker students are only thir...
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...y thirty five thousand. For Masters, most of students choose to get higher st...
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Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
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...thirty five thousand. For Masters, most of students choose to get higher studies so these s...
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...so these students were in great numbers, exactly 2,725 . Along with students who ...
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...ts were in great numbers, exactly 2,725 . Along with students who did part time j...
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...tly 2,725 . Along with students who did part time jobs , there is large number of unemplo...
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...ong with students who did part time jobs , there is large number of unemployed stu...
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...loyed students, which is 2,535 and 1,625 . Small numbers of students who did volu...
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...mbers of students who did voluntary work , which is 345 .
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...ts who did voluntary work , which is 345 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 127.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38582677165 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56369651603 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677165354331 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4056681377 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177637212989 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891597853953 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553647715688 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881657393741 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527014821906 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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