These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exanmples from your own knowledge and experience Writę at least 250 words
Nowadays more and more people are going to foreign countries with a view to finding a good job or Studying. But everything has they're both good and bad sides this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages Of living And working abroad.
They are really many Benefits to living in other countries. Frost leave it can offer a better environment to live and work. Secondly education in foreign countries such as Australia, America, Japan, England,... Has developed so Rapidly. Students are a bald to connect with modern equipment usually so they feel more enthusiastic an interest in them lessons. Thirdly, people working there can get opportunities to find jobs that they Can earn wonderful salary. Moreover, They all so can enjoy Plenty Off specialities Which never appear in our country. Finally the pork and Royce a Werner's of life and improve their knowledge in many Aspects due to the high quality of living.
On the are the Hand, Working and studying abroad can bring about some disadvantages. This sudden change of culture and customs Can take them a quite long time to get familiar With It. Another drawback Is language barrier. People in different countries have different opinions in many things. It is hard for them to completely understand each other. Another negative aspect is the cost of living. The price of things are Much higher than our country so they can't afford all of things the need for their life.
To sum up, Living and working in a foreign country have has both advantages and disadvantages. With me, i would like to live and work in my country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91821561338 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63512926587 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.588578246 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264346546614 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750442002312 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067971752888 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159318087056 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729575339849 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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