Now-a-days, cases for obesity are increasing in every age group these days. Rise in health problem because of overweight has put people's life at stake. This essay will discuss about the reasons for the overweight and solutions for the issue.
It's a bitter truth, society is facing with health issues of people. Various diseases like cancer, asthma, heart attack's are at peak in young generation as well. Youngsters these days have developed a sedentary lifestyle, they eat work and just sleep. They lack physical activities and exercises resulting in increasing blood pressure and many other problems. In recent study, 85 percent of population is suffering from health disease including the new generation. Technology advancement has made people life fast and busy.
However, people and society can avoid these problems by adopting some measures. Campaigning should be done to encourage youngsters and old age to participate in various physical exercises like yoga, playing badminton. It has been said, walking 20 minutes a day in the morning can avoid many health issues. Society should built parks in every location to motivate everyone. Last year, Delhi government opened admission to every age group to participate in various games. It is a necessity for the government to help everyone to stay fit.
In my opinion, being fit should be a basic motive of every individual in today's world. Good health will motivate to do work and earn wealth. Maintaining a regular habit of doing some activities is a necessity in today's busy schedule.
- The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society How can this problem be resolved 84
- Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person Do you think this is the best way to do it or are there better alternatives What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion 61
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 56
- Some companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform for tardy advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform 78
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21686746988 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68037315529 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.4821855949 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.1666666667 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240939875235 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660407093293 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778490076319 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137989256445 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798104440295 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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