The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the basic functioning of an energy-efficient building both in a warm and and cold environment. Overall, it can be said that the general principle of thermal efficiency is insulating the house in order to avoid the eat to enter during the summer and to come out during the colder days.
Starting with the former, the key part of the system is the reflective material used to build a roof capable to reflect the sunbeams and therefore to avoid the penetration of the of the heat inside the house which is protected even from the ground, because the floor is below the ground level.
The last feature is also important during the winter,when the temperatures drop down: an interred floor is capable to retain the heat generated inside the building and this effect is boosted by the triple-glazed window that allows more warmth and heat to come inside and to not sniff out, this greenhouse effect is corroborated by the insulating walls, which are constructed using special materials that do not allow the heat to go out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...nergy-efficient building both in a warm and and cold environment. Overall, it can be sa...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... insulating the house in order to avoid the eat to enter during the summer and to come ...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
... and therefore to avoid the penetration of the of the heat inside the house which is protecte...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...ture is also important during the winter,when the temperatures drop down: an interred...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85555555556 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73046371497 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.064058389 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.5 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.0 22.9334400587 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902652515874 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627698870438 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386464636846 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626641554403 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459925531387 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.