A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Give him/her your other news.
A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Give him/her your other news.
Dear Anna,
How’re you? Sorry it’s been so long since I last wrote. I’m so glad that you send me an invitation to spend my winter vacation with you.
Thanks so much for your letter. When I was receiving your letter, I was feeling beyond the clouds. With the snap of finger, I eagerly open it and continue to read while I was eating my lunch. I’m so happy that you invited me to come and stay with you in your home town Toronto.
You know very well, I always dreamed about this moment to go at Toronto and spend my winter holidays by watching snow. Unfortunately, I can’t accept this because I want to sharp my programming skills. And my classes are going on in winter also.
Besides this, I cleared my IELTS exam and I got my Permanent Residency Card this week. I want to migrate in your country Canada to pursue my career as a software engineer. So these classes are really important for me. I hope we can spend our next Christmas holidays together. How does that sound? See you soon!
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 245, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
.... And my classes are going on in winter also. Besides this, I cleared my IELTS ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, really, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 32.9175257732 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6625 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38034486297 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2307682453 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.2857142857 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4285714286 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541542154911 0.216113520407 251% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172961137755 0.0766984524023 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193059567471 0.0603063233224 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299805157624 0.12726935374 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245790368589 0.0580467560999 423% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.56 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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