Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Being a vegetarian has been becoming an ever-increasingly prevalent phenomenon for individuals around the world. Consequently, some people opine that it is a must for everyone to have a meat-excluded diet for health reasons. As far as I am concerned, although eating vegetables can meet the demand for the basic requirement for a balanced diet for most of the people, there are some exceptions, which means it is not the best choice for everyone.
On the one hand, scientific research, especially on biology and chemistry, has proved the viability to be a vegetarian from the perspective of nutrition. The basic nutrients that we get from food are indeed sugar, fat and protein, which is the same case for not only animals but also plants. Under this circumstance, meat products, as well as vegetables, play the same roles in providing basic needs for a healthy diet, which means the meat in our diets can be replaced by vegetables.
On the other hand, what we mentioned is only the minimum demand to stay healthy, and there are some exceptions, such as diets for injured people. Obviously, it is beneficial to supplement the diets for injured people with meat products because it will help them get back sooner. A classic example of this situation is that in China, people will prepare some hearty stew full of bones and meat for a patient if he is in the process of recovering from a fracture of the bone. Frequently, this is indeed a practical approach because meat products contain more helpful nutrients than vegetables.
On balance, it is admitted that people usually not need to rely on meat products to stay in good health. However, this is not true for everyone because supplementing a vegetarian with some meat can bring more benefits to his physical health when he gets injured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sugared'.
Suggestion: sugared
...rients that we get from food are indeed sugar, fat and protein, which is the same cas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88852459016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84975564378 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8642308652 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185484655783 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079765660015 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396652311705 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126029919054 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421798031046 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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