TPO7
The reading passage explores several reasons that wood companies of United State do not recieve ecocertification for their products. The professor, on the other hand, casts doubt on certain point made in the reading passage by giving more detailed about this issue.
First, the reading claims that american consumers may not pay attention to the ecocertification lable, which is rooted in low trust of american consumers about advertising products. The professor questions this claim, arguing that consumers can distinguish fake advertising and real one. Moreover, this certification claim indipendently and it brings the sense of confidence about products to the ametrican consumers.
Secondly, the reading holds the view that the final price of the products will be increased, leading to a decrease in sailing products. In contrast, the professor dismisses this issue due to the fact that for the products that cost only 5 or less dollors cost, it is not logical to omit the ecocertification which has a little price in comparison with the total price of product. In addition, American consumers know about the valu of preservation of the environment.
Finally, the reading points out that American wood companies sell most of their their products in the United State and they export a little amout of their products. O the contrary, the professors underlines the fact that wood companise compete not only with their own country companies but also with their foreign wood companies in order to make more profit. Therefore, it is essential for America wood companies to use ecocertification to capture both foreign and domestic consumers.
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- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 70
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. 66
- It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: their
...at American wood companies sell most of their their products in the United State and they e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37692307692 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97954317216 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530769230769 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1422227955 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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