Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Studying a foreign language is more imperative to enhance the extra-curricular activities. Some people think that it is essential to learn in middle age, whereas others are accepting to be studied when they become young. This essay will discuss the positive aspects of learning additional languages and its demerits when they do it underage.

Some are an opinion that learning any one additional language when they are too young will be an added advantage when they grow-up. This means that this would help them to horn their career. It seems that they will receive better career prospects to pursue their studies when they complete their schooling. Conversely, many argue that they are too young to learn a foreign language in their age in addition to normal academic workloads. For instance, in recent years, children are engaged with several activities such as skiing, swimming and so on that undoubtedly yield no progress than just physically engaging them in different pursuits.

It is undenied that learning a non-native language when they become young provides a great future and broaden their opportunity to study or work overseas. It is also uncomplicated for the youngsters to grasp the language very expeditious, and also there do not feel stress as they could able to maintain their schedule and handle the pressure from school and society that this will also ameliorate their skills. The students also matured enough to opt which language they prefer and interested, for instance, either German or Japanese.

To conclude, it is pivotal to study non-native language to expand their knowledge or helpful for pursuing their higher education in abroad. Considering all the facts above, Studying at a younger age be immensely useful and also effortless to ace the learning of extra language, therefore, which would outweigh than pushing them to do it when they are too young.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21568627451 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6840014714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7886007882 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193322436611 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738753437162 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269551353369 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125624195162 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00655620085728 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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