children taking their own decision

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...gretting about that thing in the future.They will be having their own world and will...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: In
...the superheros they watch in the movies.In such case they would be arguing with th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the toys which they are asking for. Some parents will allow them to be as th...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Others
...er it may be academics or entertainment.Others restrict them in doing so.No matter wha...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: No
...inment.Others restrict them in doing so.No matter whatever they are doing they wil...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Parents
...y are doing they will not be encouraged.Parents will no allow them as as they take care...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...e encouraged.Parents will no allow them as as they take care of their children.It is ...
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Suggestion: It
... as as they take care of their children.It is quite a bit hard for them to do such...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m to do such things but they do not have any other option.Instead of that they sh...
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Suggestion: Any
... do such things but they do not have any other option.Instead of that they shoul...
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Suggestion: Instead
...ut they do not have any other option.Instead of that they should tell them the reaso...
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Line 11, column 133, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite manner" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hild has to face for their own decision in a polite manner.They should be told in way that how it ...
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Suggestion: They
...r their own decision in a polite manner.They should be told in way that how it affec...
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Line 11, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Being
...ty if they are selfish about themselves.Being selfish does not make ones life a bette...
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Line 11, column 276, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... themselves.Being selfish does not make ones life a better one . To conclude th...
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Line 11, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ish does not make ones life a better one . To conclude this I can say that no...
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Line 15, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...or their things which can make them bad.However they should not be discouraged for ever...
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Line 15, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...or their things which can make them bad.However they should not be discouraged for ever...
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Line 15, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e mature enough to stop them from taking wrong decisions and allowing them to tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73069711689 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507407407407 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.196475146 49.4020404114 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.5 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281125460349 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181682627981 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884970649228 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189639437714 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10688141793 0.056905535591 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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