Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development,but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.
As opined by most nations of the world, stimulating economic growth is the best way to raise the standard of living. In my opinion, although valuable social beliefs and characters might be eroded, the possibility of having a more prosperous society is more advantageous.
Despite the downside of losing some age - long societal concepts when improving the economy, people can become financially independent as more and better jobs abound in the society. Having more money in circulation is a way of breeding more breadwinning individuals who do not just have the capability to support their families, but can also create abundant job opportunities for other residents. For example, most of the world's happiest nations, such as Norway and Canada, are those whose national governments prioritize economic reforms over cultural stability, while most African countries, even with their rich cultures, have its citizens languishing in deep hunger and poverty , and only this is because our ways of life does not bring food on our table; only money does via job creation.
Admittedly, intrinsic cultural traditions and societal values would be lost amid economic growth. Firstly, the presence of close - knit communities that have always existed since ages would be threatened. Distant relatives have always lived together under one roof; however, with the need to make more money, each individual would have to transcend great distances, often neglecting families, in order to become financially buoyant. Secondly, people would lose the true essence of happiness. Individuals would believe their true life worth lies in material possessions or the amount one has in his or her bank account, making them not to see the real joy and gladness in basic things life offers, such as play, compassion, and love. When people are unable to meet up with their wealthy individuals, they resort to heinous crimes and even suicide in rare cases.
In conclusion, though some societal problems might result should communities put more emphasis on advancing the economy, the advantage far outweighs any of the demerits because people can lead a more self - sustaining life due to a better job market
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the happiest'.
Suggestion: worlds the happiest
...her residents. For example, most of the worlds happiest nations, such as Norway and Canada, are...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s languishing in deep hunger and poverty , and only this is because our ways of li...
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Line 9, column 678, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
... see the real joy and gladness in basic things life offers, such as play, compassion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31123919308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74357051349 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64265129683 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.159262449 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.583333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114828548373 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421811665113 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375215111673 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698383985918 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00638157663784 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.