Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

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the lecture and the reading talk abou...
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the lecture and the reading talk about edmo...
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...alk about edmontosaurous live condition.The reading passage state that the discover...
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...ll the points considering no convincing.First the reading passage claim that the diet...
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...he edmontosour confirm their emigration.The lecture opposite this because mentionin...
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...ls no need emigration at all to survive.There was a good weather condition.Subconsecu...
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...vive.There was a good weather condition.Subconsecuenly they eat all the plants during the sum...
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... a good weather condition.Subconsecuenly they eat all the plants during the summe...
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...ey eat all the plants during the summer.Ones the plants die ,so the enjoy of the ve...
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...at all the plants during the summer.Ones the plants die ,so the enjoy of the very...
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...s during the summer.Ones the plants die ,so the enjoy of the very nutrient food f...
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...ing the summer.Ones the plants die ,so the enjoy of the very nutrient food from the floo...
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...y the reading give another reason saying they found some bones have been in the s...
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... some bones have been in the same place.Neverless the professor refuse this argument beca...
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...fessor refuse this argument because she mention,Some animals live in the herd because t...
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...refuse this argument because she mention,Some animals live in the herd because the pr...
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...use the protection against the predators,and to be more specific she put an example ...
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Suggestion: Finally
...ific she put an example of Rosalba elks.Finally the reading mention about those animals...
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...ific she put an example of Rosalba elks.Finally the reading mention about those animals...
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...ere well prepared to move long distance.The lecture is against this saying that,Th...
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... well prepared to move long distance.The lecture is against this saying that,The ...
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...The lecture is against this saying that,The Edmontaurous never live the juvenile be...
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...live the juvenile behind in consequences they stay in the same place for a long t...
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...a long time due to fact the juvenile are not that strong to resist. Therefore the...
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...uvenile are not that strong to resist. Therefore the lecture refuse all the reading pass...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48979591837 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3017261019 2.5805825403 128% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 21.2450331126 306% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 256.851448636 49.2860985944 521% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 358.666666667 110.228320801 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.3333333333 21.698381199 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06452816374 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11127122319 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07103444787 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213972615736 0.0662205650399 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876603517502 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00968806652509 0.0443174109184 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.3589403974 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 53.8541721854 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.0289183223 270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.498013245 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.2008830022 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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