Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society.
Others, however, believe that school is place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that school is responsible to teach young people how to be valuable members of society. Although there are some good arguments in favour of this, I think family is more important place to learn this.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why children should learn social values in school. Teaching children is a study field in colleges and universities. Schools can hire the teachers who graduated in this field and so are more familiar with up-to-dated methods of teaching social values. Moreover, many social skills need the educational space and facilities. For example, in the UK elementary schools must arrange a police station tour for seven-years-old children with the aim of teaching traffic rules.
On the other hand, I believe that parents play more important role in teaching social values to young people. Firstly, parents have always been most important model of behavior for their children. Thus, they have to do their own best in society to show the benefits of being a good member to their children. Secondly, since children spend majority of their free time at home, parents must provide an environment in which children get more involved with social skills. Recent studies showed that the principles of social behavior could be taught to the young people in home by exposing them to the educational programs of media.
In conclusion, although parents and schools alike should take responsibilities to teach young people how to be a valuable member of society, in my opinion, family is better place to learn social behavior principles to young people.
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- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10305343511 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64441022254 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2247463639 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341844377836 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123348295202 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902372858856 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241745459196 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098616110803 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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