“ Prevention is better than cure.”Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It goes without saying " Health is wealth". Presently, plenty of health ailments are spreading their roots in every nook and corner of the world. It is argued that instead of a massive outlay on treatments, spending money over offering health education and tips for prevention from diseases is more useful. Here, i would like to accord with given statement.
Multifarious points can be put down to shore up my view. First and foremost, the role of health education is terrific to save money for people. For instance, people have to spend a hefty some of money on medical treatments in hospitals in ...
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Sentence: For instance, people have to spend a hefty some of money on medical treatments in hospitals in the absence of unawareness about preventative measures before any chronical disease occure.
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Sentence: In addition, the existence of health awareness could be fruitful to educate people about healthy eating habits, detrimental effects of drugs and smoking along with importance of hygenic and nutritional foods to remain healthy.
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Sentence: Apart from it, it will enable people to use first aid and natural ways of curing to any disease before being chronical.
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Sentence: By contrast, others have cantrasting views.
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Sentence: As a result, a country can lose pletnty of bread winners.
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Morning sir score is 8.0 but
Morning sir score is 8.0 but stars are red 9.5 ... according to stars it should be 8.5 i guess ????
Yes, it should be 8.5, but
Yes, it should be 8.5, but you got only 8.0 because of Spelling Errors. Since you are a teacher, we have to be strict to you.
i offer model answers to my
i offer model answers to my students as photocopies to them after being checked by you ...
According to your view, teaching structute the way i write essay on site is useful to score at least 7.0 bands for my students ? what is your opinion???
Yes, it is a short-cut for
Yes, it is a short-cut for good marks. But your students need to have enough vocabulary words, and there are no grammar issues.
how can we write essay given
how can we write essay given below
in present tense of in future according to statement for example- the existence of old is likely to be useful or
the existence of old is useful ????
In the near future it is
expected that the proportion
of older people will be higher
than that of young people in
many developed countries.
What are the positive or
negative effects of this
development?
better: 'the existence of old
better: 'the existence of old is likely to be useful', because ' it is expected '
gud evening sir where are the bands n evaluation ???