You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
-describe the problem with the equipment
-explain how this problem is affecting your work
-say what you want the shop or company to do
I have currently been a freelancer working from home and all my works rely heavily upon the Internet. As a fast and stable internet connection is vital to my performance, I have purchased the latest internet router at Office Works on Cumberland Highway, Liverpool three days ago. It is a Logitect series five which is said to be the fastest plug and play device among its product line.
I did exactly according to the instructions from one of your staff but things turned out that I still have no internet connection as the wifi indicator light keeps pulsing in red instead of white. I also contacted my internet provider and they said neither the cable nor signal transmission has got any problem. As a result, my works have been stacked up and I don't think I am able to get them done before the deadline, this Sunday, 30th December, if there is no proper actions taken.
As it clearly appears to be a technical problem caused by a faulty product, and of course it is still under warranty, I would very much like a free and prompt exchange today as I desperately need to finish my projects in time. Please send a technician as soon as you can. I am looking forward to getting your support.
Best wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I have currently been a freelancer working from home and all m...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lt, my works have been stacked up and I dont think I am able to get them done before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58256880734 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58653776204 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678899082569 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2715899917 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140716883664 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496945560341 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251711341089 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900991377291 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114471225748 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.