You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
in your letter
describe the problem with equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about my laptop malfunction, which I brought it from your shop last week.
I’m a graphic designer, working as a character analyzer in Kreativyard design firm, whereas I have the authority to work from home. Last Sunday, when I had updated the operating system to the latest version, then after, the laptop started hanging rapidly on every short interval.
As a result, the hanging issue creating a substantial delay in my workflow. I have the deadline to submit my project and I am totally stuck in doing so in time.
I would like you to send a programmer to my address so that he could remove the unwanted bugs from the operating system or Alternatively, restore it to the previous version of OS.
I hope you will consider my request foremost and resolve the problem as soon as possible.
Warm Regards
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'or'.
Suggestion: or
...unwanted bugs from the operating system or Alternatively, restore it to the previous version of ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e it to the previous version of OS. I hope you will consider my request forem...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em as soon as possible. Warm Regards John
^^^
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon as possible. Warm Regards John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83006535948 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68004143036 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673202614379 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3253367658 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144240712073 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514886443379 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568253035289 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792073760827 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059270745163 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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