Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, education is widely available in all means. While some people believe that homeschool is an appropriate method for child's development, others argue that public school is preferable. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of both the sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter statement.
School at home help in increasing the concentration power, while away from the crowded classrooms. As, student tend to spend more time in isolation, which eventually boasts their mental stability. For example, a famous physics scientist Albert Thomas who studied all alone in his teenage, as a result, he received the Nobel prize for his achievement in the field of Relative Kinetic Energy. Admittedly, neural brain cells development can be achieved faster when an individual study alone.
However, socialism and real-life experience do play a significant role in the improvement of student psychology. For instance, I believe schools provide the opportunity for indoor and outdoor sports which is not possible at home. Additionally, in institutes, the spirit of competition makes the pupil stronger and capable of taking a decision at a crucial stage of life. for example, choosing the right job at right time fulfills the requirement of the life settlement.
To sum up, despite home education provide numerous benefits, but school is a more prominent option to chose. In my view, education center advantages outweigh the benefits of solo education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92633646423 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675213675214 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3702833037 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273439133901 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828356963865 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891076505787 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149238821577 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802999292033 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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