life was better when technology was simpler.
to what extent do you agree or dis agree?
The world was better when instruments were not as complicated as it is; in the present time. This essay agrees that life is easier with less machinese and devices. In contrast, some people believe that tasks have been plainer since electronic systems became partisipants beside humanity In all fields. Wherefore these two opinions will be discussed.
The first point of view argues that blood ;in the past, used to be less expensive because the necessities of families were minimal than it is ;in the contemporary age. For more clarifcation, the nations ;in the past, used to access things through the nature around them Without having to pay money. For example, the last generations used to use firewood for cooking, whom they get it from trees for free, while the most of this generation has to defray the home cooking gas.
On the contrary, other persons think that technology enables mankind to be faster and more effictive in get works done. Furthermore, using computers enables one person do the job of 3 employees or more. For instance, a research was conducted in Yale in 2010 revealed that there has been being a sharp diminishing in the number of painters by 90% in England for last decade. That was as a cosequence, of wide spreading of design and drawing programs and applications.
In conclusion, this article supports the commune who prefer the old life-style (Technology-free), whereas the recent-style (relying on appliances) is encouraged by others. It is recommended that firms ought to product; in the future, low-cost and renewable energy devices and equipments ,To help people overcome a epochal nodus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07835820896 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81036047058 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.723235761 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135383741872 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462647098597 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531511382691 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772608164713 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055101951269 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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