life was better when technology was simpler.
to extent do you agree with that?
The world was better when instruments were not as complicated as it is; in the present time. This essay agrees that life is easier with less machines and devices. In contrast, some people believe that tasks have been plainer since electronic systems became participants beside humanity In all fields; these two opinions will be discussed.
The first point of view argues that blood ;in the past, used to be less expensive because the necessities of families were minimal than it is; in the contemporary age. For more clarification, the nations ;in the past, used to access things through the nature around them Without having to pay money. For example, the last generations used to use firewood for cooking, whom they get it from trees for free; however, the most of this generation has to defray the home cooking gas.
On the contrary, other persons think that technology enables mankind to be faster and more effective in get works done. Furthermore, using computers enables one person do the job of 3 employees or more. For instance, a research was conducted in Yale in 2010 revealed that there has been being a sharp diminishing in the number of painters by 90% in England for last decade ;as a cosequence, of wide spreading of design and drawing programs and applications .
In conclusion, this article supports the commune who prefers the old life-style (Simple technology), whereas the recent-style (relying on appliances) is encouraged by others. It is recommended that firms ought to product; in the future, low-cost and renewable energy devices and equipments To make things slicker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08745247148 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75994476579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680608365019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2325761553 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.636363636 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116108932809 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465258648931 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644263620756 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682119324785 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672638405107 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.