It is ubiquitous that expansion of supermarkets is in a rapid way. While some people are of the opinion that the presence of these markets would bring an end to local communities, others argue that these are the result of globalization. In this essay, I will explain my support for the latter argument.
Firstly, supermarkets introduce wide variety of unique and reasonably priced products compare to local market. Local businesses renowned for its mediocre products with MRP price always. Customers often tend to be obstreperous over the astronomical amount for products. On the other hand, the chain stores provide us great deal of discounts on almost every product due to hyper competition with other stores. For instance, we would get huge discount on groceries or electronic goods in the malls because they would purchase items as whole so that they would provide these items cheap for its consumers.
Secondly, these Marts help boosting economy and generate more employment in any region. As a result, ample of job opportunities would be generated such as Vendors, Store Managers and Cashier. A recent study reported a growth in employment from 75 to 82 percent because of establishing these. This is crucial in developing countries as unemployment is a crux in their social issues.
In Conclusion, it is vital to expand the super markets as it provides plethora of benefits to the society in terms of generating economy and raising employability. In addition to that, customers get satisfied with the product range and reduction in price.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rapid way" with adverb for "rapid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...itous that expansion of supermarkets is in a rapid way. While some people are of the opinion t...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...or its mediocre products with MRP price always. Customers often tend to be obstreperou...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to boost' or 'boost'.
Suggestion: to boost; boost
...onsumers. Secondly, these Marts help boosting economy and generate more employment in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89168657049 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1848705706 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127167296078 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439812331881 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601286533592 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742937455188 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810062505618 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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