people work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Some people argue that if you want to live, you need money for that. So, to earn money, you have to work as a slave of industries. However, people do not work for money because if they do, they will find themselves running to catch the money. I believe that people do not work for the money, it’s another way around. I will discuss the two main reasons in the following essay.
First of all, people have a passion for their dream, like to achieve some goal, some status in society, so people work for that reason. In addition to that, a person wants to make his or her family inspire for better growth of his or her children, so he or she can be an ideal example of his or her child’s role model. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, is my elder brother. He is working in a multinational company as the facility manager. He had a mundane life, and lacked social life, causes him to live only for money. Every day, he used to get tired of his exhausting work. But he has a habit of reading, he used to read books, he learned about the working style, and how to make life gregarious. As a result of this, he became more creative in his work and got rid of his quotidian life. So, he shaped his life in a garrulous and gregarious manner. One valuable thing taught by him to me, do not run for the money, let the money walk with you, this sentence plays a vital role to analyze myself at this point.
Secondly, if people will start work for money, then we will not have such an advancement of a computer. People work because they have career goals to achieve, to make the best of it. People work for their interests, their self-satisfaction. They have already developed the love for their work, so there is no money involved in with his or her job. For example, consider Elon Musk, is he working for money? The correct answer is no; he is not. He has a taxing schedule of work. Moreover, handling four companies, at the same time, is not easy work to do. But we can see: he is doing great. What motivates him? The passion, goals, to improve society, to help see the world from a different angle. That drives him every day to get in his shoes and work. So, people do not work for money to live, but it is passion, goals that drive them to do work.
To sum up, I believe that people do not work for money to live unless they are penurious. This is because people have a passion for their work, to do whole heartily and make a better life for society and for them.
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- People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
- People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
- people work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
- People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27906976744 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30775020668 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482029598309 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9146763948 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4666666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7666666667 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308838086877 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101489443425 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693613144822 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230589813839 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569952539627 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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