Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the world today dominated by the technology. People are more likely for online-marketing as It’s save the time for traveling to the shops and enormous number of products are available in the internet. Despite the advantages, there can be seen some drawbacks as well. However, I believe the advantages are more compare to the disadvantages.
It is evident that the variety of selections are available in the e-market. People in the globe, conveniently purchase the items through the internet as on their own choice even it’s available in another country. Nevertheless, it gives easy access for the customers to compare the prices and the appearance before they buy. Most importantly, books, air tickets and groceries have become popular in online sales in fact, the buyer having free access for comparison, inquiries and comments which can get them the knowledge and the assurance before make the payment.
The drawbacks of e-commerce is it takes time to reach to the purchaser. Therefore, this method cannot apply for every items which are urgent to buy. Not only that but also there can be seen many cases of online bought items that were not matched with the given specification which involves for customer dissatisfaction. . For instance, the marketing team at Colombo marketing faculty revealed by a questionnaire in 2008, 80% of people said they were not satisfied with e-commerce. In addition, some countries are having restrictions for some items. They do not allow all type of items to import. So the people are having access for limited items purchase through internet.
To conclude, People who buy the things through internet has become more popular in today’s world. However, I think it has substantial benefits for customers including, variety of selections and free information availability compared to the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33898305085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98956518578 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3211403746 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6470588235 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178657165772 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552522607605 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055043990389 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121617780401 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292235732488 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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