In many countries,the proportion of olde people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
The ratio of senior citizen people is becoming larger in most of the countries. I will discuss both the positive and negative impacts on the human kind and I will give my justification in the following paragraphs.
On the One hand, senior citizen are enlarging day by day because of advancement in technology. Due to this influence people are living longer than ever before. Older people are more experienced than younger people and can contribute their efforts to community. they can easily share their experiences and easily share historical stories to new generation. For instance, old teachers, in the schools can learn pupils very effectively than young teachers due to lack of skill. As a result, the part of older people could be more beneficial to today's community.
On the contrary, few people considering older citizens as a burden because of that countries poverty rate. increase in the poverty ratio is one of the horrible region of senior citizens becoming stress to the humankind. Older people require more attention and extra care. But because of generation gap and extreme poverty they are often ignored. Aged people cannot give their efforts to do for societies. For example, old age people cannot spend penny to their relatives. As a consequences they are probably ignored by community.
To recapitulate, I re-iterate my views that significant portion of older people can be beneficial to humankind but if its goes to the extreme proportion then it would not be good for younger people and for them too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09920634921 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77660689608 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9125120463 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172120530806 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559738507346 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411190808059 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999405038605 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196792377395 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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