You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words
Dear Mr. Ahmed,
I am a current volunteer with your charity institution, I have been part of the teaching team for five months now, and I am specialised in teaching science for illiterate children.
Undoubtedly, I enjoyed participating such a great volunteering project, not only because of the professional program, which taught me valuable meanings, but also because of the kindness and beautiful personalities of other team's members. However, unfortunately, I am writing to inform you that this will be my last month working with you as I am currently arranging my immigration process, though it will be difficult to keep up with multiple tasks before travelling.
Nevertheless, your instituation have became my second family, if you could please accept my recommendation of hiring my younger sister, Salma, to be taking my place from the next month. I spoke to her and she is so excited to join. Additionally, she had already attended two classes with me before, hence she has ideas about how to run the work.
I hope you consider my apology, and accept my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Sara Eltantawy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. Ahmed, I am a current volunteer with your chari...
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...aching science for illiterate children. Undoubtedly, I enjoyed participating suc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... with multiple tasks before travelling. Nevertheless, your instituation have bec...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... Nevertheless, your instituation have became my second family, if you could please a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y recommendation. Yours sincerely, Sara Eltantawy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18829541127 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3768700567 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183576241512 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668689294373 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465268663653 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101659322845 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114852971894 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.