Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
People become so busy with their lives that they don't even care about what happens in the next house unless it doesn't affect our house.According to the issue he states that ideology and beliefs of different people but one must understand that what we breath today is the nature which provides the air.Protecting our nature is every human's right atleast for future generations.
Firstly,The change in the temperature the increase in humidity is because of the human beings.For example there was a city where the buildings were built by cutting down the trees and on the rivers which are completely in dry state.After a year the city faced huge rainfall due to which the buildings were completely submerged they could not move out of buildings roads were blocked they had to stay on the top of the building and the food was sent through helicopters.This happened because of our negligence the mistake we do and then had to face such consequences.The government should never give permission to construct such buildings and also if the trees are cut they should put a penalty for that.
Secondly,It is totally understandable that people are rushing in thier lives and fall in short of time and maintain the financial well-being.But we don't protect our nature and save our plant and animal species probably the future generations would never see any animals like now hardly find tigers and rhinos due to the temperature change and to breathe also maybe they might have to purchase oxygen cylinders as we keep cutting down the trees there would be no oxygen available later.
For example,the amazon forest which was the home for many animals part of it got burnt due to the global warming,climate change when the forest itself starts burning we can imagine that it is not much long time that our cities would dry up and catch fire due to rise in temperatures.
Thirdly,people think that it is already affected and even now we try and protect there is no point we can save them.Such things can always be always be reversed when we start preserving them and letting them their own life.For example schools can start initiating camps where the child can plant trees every week teach them how to conserve the nature.A group of people in colony members on weekends maybe then can all get together and start planting trees instead going out and spending so much of money in temporary things and let other people know the benefits of protecting our nature.We can place some water outside our home where the birds and animals can drink.In this way every human contributes we can
preserve our nature.
In the conclusion,i would say that the effort we make today can be useful for better tomorrow so it is advisible that spending so much money on things just show that we are earning more will never get you greater happiness than protecting and conserving our nature for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89068825911 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63870415031 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524291497976 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 23.0359550562 356% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.928252036 60.3974514979 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 402.666666667 118.986275619 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.3333333333 23.4991977007 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8333333333 5.21951772744 342% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979183085065 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501475897954 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297647033785 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433391265824 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033085032618 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.8 14.1392134831 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.29 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 11.2143820225 310% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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