The draft illustrates a schematic representation of a procedure on how sea water is converted to be potable and unadulterated.
To begin, salt water proceeds to a pre-treatment filter, where it will be percolated or sifted. After that water is forced through a particular sheet at an elevated thrust. This sea water concentrate composed of contaminated substances and salt. Subsequently, as the water is pumped through this membrane at an increase pressure. The water molecules then separates from impurities and salt. After that both sea water concentrate and filter backwash flows back to the sea...
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Muza
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:
- trunk roads and daily commuting times. 70
- The following graph shows the number of people (by age) attending the cinema more than once a month.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.Write at least 150 words. 45
- Nowadays more people choose to move out from the area where they grew up, in a search for a better job. Do you think there are more advantages than disadvantages to this development? Why? 80
- Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries.Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experie 55
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. 70
Sentence: This is where it is stocked for later utilizatiion or usage.Finally, this uncontaminated water can now be utilized for drinking.
Error: utilizatiion Suggestion: utilization
flaws:
No. of Words: 153 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 153 200
No. of Characters: 780 1000
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.098 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.478 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4