The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the comparative statistics on the 2016 police reports (Theft reports, Noise complaints and traffic violations) in the Johnstown where the line graph indicates the mean monthly temperature in Johnstown. The unit of temperature is measured in Celsius (C).
Overall, it can be seen that the traffic violation is the greatest amount records of Johnstown police for the entire year whereas noise complaint reports have the least number. The number of theft complaints is registered more in the third and fourth quarter of the year. The average monthly temperature of the starting year was low and then gradually increasing till the month of July and then it plummets.
On the one hand, Traffic violation complaint has registered in record for the first quarter of the year (Jan-Mar) is under 200 and it is the largest number of report for the 2016 and then gradually decreasing till the third quarter (July - Sept) and it is the least number of record for 2016 ( around 145), In the fourth quarter again it rose above 150. Conversely, Theft reports started in the first quarter with the around 20 records and then it rose around 46 in the second quarter (Apr-June) and then we can see the dramatic increase between July to September month, but suddenly diminished at the end of the year (Oct-Dec).
On the other hand, throughout the year, noise complaint registered was almost the same around between 8 to 10 records. While the average monthly temperature for the initial month of the year (Jan)is below 7.5 C and the gently rose till the month of July (24 c) but in between, we can see a slight difference in April. From Aug temperature started decreasing as it is rainy season (22.5 c) and in Nov it reached to 8 C because it is a winter season.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is the least number of record for 2016 around 145, In the fourth quarter again ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, second, so, then, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79738562092 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57547427183 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457516339869 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2296859783 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.8 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14654071494 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612360253038 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616318807739 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107721780315 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473305940561 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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