You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.
Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter
explain why you do not like the current programs
describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead
explain why these programs are better
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Raymond drummond,
I am writing as regards the current programs been aired in the evenings at MBT your TV station.
Getting home after a long day at work, i resort to watching your TV station as a form of relaxation, but tuning in and finding out the programs been shown are very boring and uninteresting is displeasing to say the least. MBT is a renowned TV station known for its pure education and entertainment value with a good reputation over the years. It's sad to say it doesn't appear so anymore.
I enjoy watching reality shows, so i expect mbt your tv station to air lots of reality shows showcasing local contents, such as; the big brother Nigeria, the real housewives of Lagos, football wives of Nigeria, celebrity wives of Nigeria . these are shows that are very relatable, they create awareness on the happenings in the economy, and they provide premium contents that will make viewers glued to their TV screens.
Also family game shows, children game shows need to be aired to maintain the educational standard mbt station has set for itself over the years, this would garner lots of sponsorship which will invariably birth more shows to the advantage of both the station and the viewers.
I hope you look into these suggestions and fast track its occurrence.
Regards,
Esther Olabimpe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... TV station as a form of relaxation, but tuning in and finding out the programs b...
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...station known for its pure education and entertainment value with a good reputati...
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...ation over the years. Its sad to say it doesnt appear so anymore. I enjoy watchi...
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... I enjoy watching reality shows, so i expect mbt your tv station to air lots...
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..., so i expect mbt your tv station to air lots of reality shows showcasing local ...
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...pect mbt your tv station to air lots of reality shows showcasing local contents,...
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..., the real housewives of Lagos, football wives of Nigeria, celebrity wives of Nig...
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...s of Nigeria, celebrity wives of Nigeria . these are shows that are very relatable...
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...f Nigeria, celebrity wives of Nigeria . these are shows that are very relatable, they...
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...onomy, and they provide premium contents that will make viewers glued to their TV...
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...make viewers glued to their TV screens. Also family game shows, children game sh...
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...ewers glued to their TV screens. Also family game shows, children game shows ...
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...ast track its occurrence. Regards, Esther Olabimpe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, as regards, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97767857143 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61277393862 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2981188373 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132809407396 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498356166046 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432970015257 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690104721944 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470483516398 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.