Countries are becoming more and more similar because people buy same products anywhere in the world. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Humans today, are able to purchase akin commodities all around the world, as a result of which nations seem to appear alike. In my opinion, though economic growth of nation is a fruitful result of above notion, it has somehow brought adverse effect on business of local artists.
Talking about the plus points first, one of the major aspects of this phenomenon is that it has led to overall financial increment of nations. With liberalisation of trade barriers and laws, the process of import and export across the countries has smoothed. This has not only eased the flow of goods and services within a state, but has certainly expanded the market in terms of variety of products available to customers. Consequently, it has contributed in increasing GDP of developing nations. Henceforth, booming up economy of state. For instance, a recent survey conducted by Delhi School of Economics revealed that there has been a 16% hike in variation of women clothes available because of this globalization, which ultimately raised India’s GDP by 0.5% for 2018-19.
Counting the drawbacks, artisans from different countries are saddened with the gradual boom of exchanging ideas and artefacts. Not only the objects and amenities got global, but with the mondialisation of skills, there are duplicates or look alike of regional craft-works facilely made in other countries. This has deteriorated the native cultural markets of many nations with rich heritage. Therefore, hampering there age long works and bringing in a sheer decline in their source of income. To exemplify, some shops that dealt with ancient wooden sculptures have recently shut down in southern part of India as they could no longer flourish in their business.
To conclude, it is true that the process of internationalization has led to the availability of similar commodities and facilities in most parts of the world. And no one can deny the fact that it has enabled nations to mint in money and positively impacted the economies on wider fronts. Yet, territorial artists have had a detrimental effect on their professions and this in my opinion is a negative development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my opinion is a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, talking about, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20977011494 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97986566016 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617816091954 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5178107311 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11427318126 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318596893741 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247709829529 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614109642451 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384771698339 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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