Question : Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
Both the reading passage and the lecture are talking about the device used for the greed army. The reading claims that this new device was never used. However in the lecture the professor refute all the point in the passage considering unconvincing it and logically dispute and challenges all the points.
First of all according to the reading the Greeks were not prepare technologically.The lecture deny this argument saying that, to start the fire they don't need a big ship ,Instead the utilize a dozen of ships to provoke the fire.
Secondly the reading says that to bring fire to the ships the mirror takes too much time.Neverless the professor reject this saying that.Some experoiment probe that the fire could be start in 10min. Due to fact the ship was not only wood,they made this with others materials, for example pitch that was very flammable.
Finally the reading consider that.The mirrors are not considering something better.The professor is not agree with this saying that.They used this methods , because the romans soldiers were familiar with the flaming arrow.so indeed the will expect this, But with the mirror they will be surprise become the fire start suddenly in the ship.Therfore the lecture totally oposses the reading passage
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...rs are not considering something better.The professor is not agree with this saying...
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...ut with the mirror they will be surprise become the fire start suddenly in the sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, for example, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6052408081 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.417724666 49.2860985944 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.714285714 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06452816374 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108592447703 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052326918189 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159334484733 0.0662205650399 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667152030936 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162190146287 0.0443174109184 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.3589403974 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.