The bar chart provided illustrates the percentage of Australian people divided by age which did regular exercise during 2010.
Overall it can be seen that females had higher percentages than males in all the different age categories, except for the age group 15 to 24.
Women from 25 to 64 years old did more physical activity than men, staying always above 48.9%.
Especially the chart shows that females in the age group 45 to 54 had the highest percentage amongst all the categories (with a percentage of 53.3%), while males in the age group 35 to 44 had the lowest one with a percentage of 39.5%.
However, in the youngest and oldest age groups (15 to 24 and 65 and over) the datas are different.
The 15 to 24 category is the only age group where men's percentage is higher than women's one with a difference of 5.1% (52.8% for men and 47.7% for women).
In the 65 and over category it can be seen that the percentages of males and females are almost the same with only a difference of 0.4% (46.7% and 47.1% respectively).
- The diagram illustrates the process of making traditional wooden shoes called clogs 63
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both th 56
- the line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 48
- the line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagram illustrates the process of making traditional wooden shoes called clogs 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
... the datas are different. The 15 to 24 category is the only age group where mens percen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52711049067 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7879864244 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400329341646 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179173502853 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869582127235 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179173502853 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869582127235 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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