You stayed at a hotel last week. After you git home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter
-explain what happened to your watch
-describe your watch
-ask the manager to help you find it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I stayed in your hotel for two nights from 2nd october to 4th october of 2019 and my purpose of writing to you is to inform you about my wrist watch that I left in your hotel by mistake. it is Seiko5 brand mechanical wrist watch with transparent dial, which is easily identifiable.
I really enjoyed the nights that I spent in your hotel as the amenities were excellent, not to mention the cordial behaviour of the hotel staff. On my check-out day, I was in a hurry to catch my flight, so I rushed for breakfast and kept the watch beside me while eating. I lost by focus on the moment I had to take a phone call that I left the eatery quickly, leaving the watch on the table. The waiter, serving my table, was a mid-aged person with remarkable beard.
I would be glad if you please describe the watch to the eatery staff and recover that for me. Once you have collected the item, please send it back to me by registered parcel service. I assure you that I will cover all the expenses related to it.
I look forward to receive the desired parcel from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Tasnim Fahmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...h that I left in your hotel by mistake. it is Seiko5 brand mechanical wrist watch ...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...nses related to it. I look forward to receive the desired parcel from you soon. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45714285714 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33761026878 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0639153516 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361562992545 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117609010418 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888447653367 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195521267206 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907688557923 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.