Doctors in many countries believe that people are not getting enough exercise.
What might be causing this lack of exercise?
What can be done to address the issue?
In recent years, doctors have been repeatedly reporting the increasing number of patients who lack physical exercise. As people are becoming more career-oriented, they are left with less time available for performing exercise and getting health consciousness. In this essay, the reasons behind the lack of exercise as well as the ways to overcome this issue will be discussed.
Everyone is focused in achieving good progress in their career, that is why they care less about the work-life-balance that is being disrupted in the process. Apart from work, employees keep a little time for themselves, as a result they can hardly schedule the remaining time for exercise. Moreover, everybody is less concerned about their health. Low-level knowledge regarding healthy life and exercise is also contributing to the fact that nobody finds it worth saving some time for workouts. The career focused life-style and inadequate health-consciousness contribute in low-level of exercise among the people.
However, awareness shall be spread in the society with the intention to encourage everyone to keep a balance between profession and life. Along with that, the prerequisites of a disease-free human body shall also be discussed with the civics which will not only encourage the audience to manage some time for physical work-outs on daily basis, but also make them realize to re-establish a balance between their career and life. Once a person is well-aware of his physical fitness, he will be motivated to schedule the daily office tasks and leave the office premise on time, making enough time available to have some sports both for mental stress-relief and physical-benefit.
To conclude, the current lifestyle does not allow a person to pursue a daily exercise because of time barrier. This bar can easily be eradicated by enlightening everyone about the importance of workouts to live a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36877076412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06468996605 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.015708952 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163552040783 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639306209675 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548565394044 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117528304987 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069048384633 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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