You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Mr. Kadam,
I am writing this letter in connection with my misplaced student ID card in the school premises last week. Due to which I have faced a lot of issues since then.
I am a student of commerce dept and my student ID number is 12527. I lost my ID card last Wednesday when we were playing cricket on the school playground. I realized that I may have left my card on the ground when I came back to class for the next lecture when the teacher brought it to my notice. I tried looking for it on the ground followed by the lost and found department but was unable to find it. Since then, I have faced lot of difficulties such as entering the school premises, issuing books from the library, accessing the computer lab and accessing sports club. I have an assignment pending in the next 5 days which I think will be difficult to submit if I don’t get the access to library and computer lab.
I would appreciate if you could help me with the process to issue a new card. I am also ready to pay the charges for issuance of new card. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Rajesh Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ID) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...connection with my misplaced student ID card in the school premises last week. Due t...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ID) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...tudent ID number is 12527. I lost my ID card last Wednesday when we were playing cri...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aying cricket on the school playground. I realized that I may have left my card o...
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Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...en the teacher brought it to my notice. I tried looking for it on the ground foll...
^
Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e with the process to issue a new card. I am also ready to pay the charges for is...
^
Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y the charges for issuance of new card. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37440758294 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41010988037 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2350885108 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226575429324 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794625774187 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442848226443 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146548400024 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299468402572 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.