An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The deficiency of the vitamin A, among the people of the impoverised country of Tagus, is try to fulfill through the media of an international development organization.They fulfill this deficiency via the development of new type of millet seed, as most is consumed by most of the people of the Tagus.However the cost of this millet cost is high but the government will provide the subsidies in order to promote this new type of millet.The given premise is true, but incomplete, therefore the assumptions are unwarranted.In order to maintain the validity of the conclusion, atleast three unstated assumptions should be solved.
Is is necessary to check the backgroud, authenticity of the international company? The company which developed this new millet seed breed may be fraud: they are intended to deceived the country.For instance, if company is fraud then it neither give the result nor accompolised the deficiecy of the vitamin A .
Whether the new engineered breed of millet is only for doing research?The company may be just performing the result in order to check the effectiveness of the new millet seed and if it successed then they intended to apply in their country or they may send it to the international market.
Is is necessary to discover the other method to fulfil the deficiency of vitamin A? As all the people of the Tagus may not take the millet as their meal thats why they cannot be recovered by this method.
In conclusion the argument, as it stands now, is considerably flaw due to its reliance on several unwarranted assumptions.If the author give the answers of the atleast above mentioned three questions and further evidences (perhaps in the form of systematic studies) then there will be the possibilities to evaluate the validity of the proposed recommendation.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1465 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.907 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.889 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.471 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.83 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
... international development organization.They fulfill this deficiency via the develop...
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Suggestion: However
...umed by most of the people of the Tagus.However the cost of this millet cost is high bu...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...umed by most of the people of the Tagus.However the cost of this millet cost is high bu...
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Suggestion: The
...rder to promote this new type of millet.The given premise is true, but incomplete, ...
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Suggestion: In
...erefore the assumptions are unwarranted.In order to maintain the validity of the c...
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Suggestion: Is
...ated assumptions should be solved. Is is necessary to check the backgroud, auth...
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...assumptions should be solved. Is is necessary to check the backgroud, authen...
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...ey are intended to deceived the country.For instance, if company is fraud then it n...
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...ompolised the deficiecy of the vitamin A . Whether the new engineered breed o...
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Suggestion: The
...ed of millet is only for doing research?The company may be just performing the resu...
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Suggestion: Is
...nd it to the international market. Is is necessary to discover the other method ...
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Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s may not take the millet as their meal thats why they cannot be recovered by this me...
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Line 17, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'flawed'.
Suggestion: flawed
...ment, as it stands now, is considerably flaw due to its reliance on several unwarran...
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Suggestion: If
...ance on several unwarranted assumptions.If the author give the answers of the atle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 296.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15423707601 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.8473053892 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.037977853 57.8364921388 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.285714286 119.503703932 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2857142857 23.324526521 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.70786347227 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442418432114 0.218282227539 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172268450072 0.0743258471296 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130491178455 0.0701772020484 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216670175774 0.128457276422 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130085817945 0.0628817314937 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 14.3799401198 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.3550499002 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.197005988 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 12.3882235529 492% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.1389221557 169% => OK
text_standard: 61.0 11.9071856287 512% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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