Some people think that couples should live together before getting married to start knowing each other better and see if they are compatible. Others say that because of this tendency people become immoral and only deep emotional attachment makes a durable alliance.
What is your opinion?
Marriage has always been considered as the most important event in everyone’s life as it is the beginning of the family and is a life-long commitment between two people. Some of us are convinced that couples are not allowed to live together before the wedding while others believe that this leads to better understanding among lovers. To my mind, joint life without marriage is acceptable and maybe even mandatory.
Firstly, I strongly believe that such step prevents a great number of quarrels and divorces. While young people just date they are not involved in day-to-day routine. Living together tests the strength of people’s relationships and allows to see if one can stand beloved’s annoying habits. For example, according to the statistics 2/3 of Americans believe that that moving in together before marriage is a good way to avoid divorce. Therefore, it is much better to end the relations during the dating rather than after marriage.
Secondly, I guess that prohibition of sex and other close relations before marriage has been made by the religion and national traditions. Fortunately, nowadays being unchaste is not a sin anymore. That is why joint life gives a chance to realize whether or not a person might spend the rest of life with their current partner. For example, in all developed countries the church does not effects people on the problem of joint life without marriage that leads to the complete absence of moral condemnation. Thus, if a couple strives to live together nobody will sentence them.
To conclude, before making such an important step like marriage, partners should try to know each other better and live together if they would like to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... great number of quarrels and divorces. While young people just date they are not inv...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seeing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: seeing
... people's relationships and allows to see if one can stand beloved's annoyin...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...hy joint life gives a chance to realize whether or not a person might spend the rest of life w...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: effect
...developed countries the church does not effects people on the problem of joint life wit...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...developed countries the church does not effects people on the problem of joint life wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10431654676 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76837299377 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5974643591 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221450698989 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066086054911 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753349309115 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140264997045 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559820928282 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.