The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?
A lot of global problems have been discussed recently, but I believe the major issue is overpopulation. As a result, humanity faces a lack of vital assets like water, food and fuel. This essay will discuss the main effects associated with overcrowding as well as resource scarcity and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
To my mind, an enormous number of people causes a lack of territory not only for a living, but also for cultivation. Even less than 30 percent of the planet is suitable for farming and planting so the more people the less amount of food on average. Developing countries feel it much stronger because they usually depend on agriculture. In the same way overpopulation can lead to unemployment and poverty due to more individuals apply for the same job which reduce wage level. In other words, overcrowding results in dearth of land, main resources and even indigence.
I'm convinced that the best solutions to confront with mentioned difficulties are to raise the level of the nation's wealth and literacy. The overcrowding problem commonly appears in poor countries among its uneducated part. That is why the world community should take some actions to overcome such problems by better standards of living for everyone. For example, scientists discover that the wealthier a person lives the later their have a child. According to the existing statistics, the certain educational standard helps provide good career which often follows by later marriage and planned pregnancy. Thus, education and welfare of citizens are those solution tools that can save the Earth from population bomb.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that ground for planting and food producing capabilities are limited, moreover, unemployment and poverty rates are related to the overpopulation problematic. I consider that education and economic prosperity are the most appropriate methods to conquer those issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in other words, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93330275511 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.716128837 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125222089311 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034801282098 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048562421349 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730387622297 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312967421149 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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