Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth. Which point of view do you agree with?
The scientists have always been interested in the universe, maintaining its infinity and numerous mysteries, which are hidden behind other planets and constellations. The last century was devoted to the expand frontiers of knowledge about the outer space and. Despite the desire to learn all secrets of this world, I consider that a large number of unsolved problems on Earth should prevent governments from spending billion dollars on space programs.
To begin with, the ecological situation on our globe is getting worse each year, including such problems as increased periods of heat wave or ecosystem destruction. If this tendency continues, the mankind will need to search for another planet, where all 7,5 billion people could stay. However, the scientists have not found such alternative option in the universe, so the money, budgeted at the space programs, should be revised on behalf of the Earth problems. For example, depletion of natural resources without creation of the replacement is predicted to cause world starvation, ocean acidification in the nearest future, but Russia has spent twice less money on nature problems than on missile launches last year. Thus, to discover new universes, Earthers need to bring order on their planet.
Moreover, the burning issue nowadays is the human health risks, being uncurable diseases and previously unknown infections. The 21st century is famous for its technological progress, which, unfortunately, cannot heal all illnesses, which any person can face. Medical workers in every country should be paid handsomely, because sometimes they fight not only with flue or common cold, but also with the life-threatening sickness. For example, new corona virus has appeared in 2020 and made most of the space programs delay, while doctors and nurses are all involved in a hard and exhausting work. In other words, government must separate “essential” question from “unimportant” issues.
To conclude, the exploration of the outer space takes time from the best scientists, who could have spent it on solving more urgent problems. That means that every person should remember about the nature, which surrounds us and become more “down to earth”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: a billion
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Suggestion:
...nds us and become more “down to earth”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44476744186 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83501481802 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671511627907 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.674350469 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153749927351 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456235729384 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456240466863 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859188957087 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103813707401 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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