Some people think that e books are the death of paper books while other think that paper books will never disappear Discuss both views .
Some people say that the electronic books has increased, people didn't follow the paper books other claim that text materials never vanish . This essay I will discuss both views in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, modern technology take place of text books in the world so paper material prone to disappear. Firstly, e- books beneficial for people they carry books along with whenever they want to read it .Secondly, learning institute promote to children use of electronic gadgets to make presentation assignment by Microsoft software simply because teacher get assignment in few seconds through emails and they motivate to kids download e- books from internet for completing syllabus of academic quick as soon as possible. As a consequence, electronic books is convenient and children don't need to go library they prefer to e-books rather than paper.
On the other hand, the government and army , scientist research official documents not kept into computer because it's important document of nations they don't want to share personal information with others like holy books such as Shri Guru Granth Sahib ji and Quran wrote by teacher of religion it's ritual of custom and they don't convert into e- books and respect of those hand written materials. Due to this, people cannot suffer from detrimental diseases like loss of vision, cervical pain if they would read paper books. Another reason is that army use paper physical map book Mainly because it's privacy rather than e books because it's hacked by hacker .for instance the Washington library that store many hand written books in it so it's the best epitome show that paper books will never vanish.
To conclude, despite electronic books having some advantages but several drawbacks these are not ignored. In my opinion paper material is kept red data of the world so it has more valuable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11184210526 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47845171112 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.921588111 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.4 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408564036673 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174399511557 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951868080308 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272564432197 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104167775034 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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