The table below given information about students enrolments at Manchester university in 1937 and 1967 ,2017 .summarize the information selecting main features and relevant and comparisons .
The given chart compares the proportion of boys and girls enrolments at Manchester university during the time period 1937,1967and 2017.
Overall, the total percentage of candidates in 2017 year was higher than other period of time. In all the years the students enrolling proportion of most by males and females as well as locals.
In the year 2017, the total proportion of students is highest, at 6254 compared with 327 and 1133 for new children in the year 1937 and 1967 respectively. The percentage of females account for 55 of the total students in the. Year 2017 while the percentage were lower for 1937 and 3 decades, at 45% and , at only 35% respectively. However, in terms of local students that largest percentage in 1937, accounting for 55%. The figures for year 2017 and 1967are only 15% and 2% respectively.Moreover, students were enrolling at university from abroad which has largest percentage at 32% in 2017 as compared to 6% in year 1937 and 7% of 1967 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94011976048 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0615323683 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9133332174 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221714593152 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112725250003 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679040339647 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163033286802 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679973671268 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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