Compare large family with the small one?
Families are important because they form the basis for socialization. The family structure has varied greatly over time include a large family and a small one.
Family members are more supportive of the large family. If one of them has a serious problem the others will help him/her to solve. These families have a more relationship together so they may don’t suffer from emotional problems due to strand people.but if the parents couldn’t able to afford their life's costs, these positive cases are mentioned above will be changed. They suffer from a lack of money. Their diet can also be poor because less money is spent on food. Their children couldn't enter the high quality of school or university because of high tuition, room, and board. There are many arguments that this structure has a successful issue or doesn’t.
On the other hand, the number of people living alone or the couple with no children has more than increased in the last 20 years. This structure will create a more isolationist. This makes less community in society but they have more privacy and time to do their work and interest.
In conclusion, the traditional family structure probably is getting weak and the people tend to live alone. I believe this kind of attitude has an unpleasant result in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re more supportive of the large family. If one of them has a serious problem the o...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... money is spent on food. Their children couldnt enter the high quality of school or uni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97272727273 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63587769816 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2038700842 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190399600898 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653733779276 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109381593682 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128699561954 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127346864376 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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