Humans have evolves from centuries and so is the environment. However, there is a significant rise in temperature over the past few years due to depletion of the ozone layer and deforestation, subsequently, If authorities commence an awareness campaign about the adverse effect and also should invest in electric vehicles will definitely solve the global warming.
There are two predominant reasons why we are experiencing temperature raise each year. _ First is the depletion of the ozone layer, which is caused due to emission of carbon gases, mainly from factories, powerplants and fuel vehicles. In fact, carbon is considered the enemy to our fragile environment. Second is the deforestration, as trees are the only source of oxygen and oxygen being the main element of the ozone layer, apparently, cutting down trees will out_balance the ratio between carbon and oxygen, resulting in depletion of the ozone layer.
Having said that, If people are educated about the adverse outcomes of global warming and also if we replace fuel motors with any other alternative source than the problem of raising rising temperature could be solved. According to research by California university, if people could stop using their vehicles for a period of 2 months all over the planet, this would result in restoring the environment to its normal state.
In conclusion, environment upheaval due to human activities has become a prevailing concern, this essay discussed two contributing factors of soaring temperature, and In addition besides, also has given the remedial measure that could be enacted to combat this malignant catastrophic global warming.
- You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.In your letter, you should tell: • why you ride a bicycle to work • what the problem is with the parking • 73
- There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? 73
- You have organised 90th birthday party of your relative and invited elderly guests also. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel manager, to provide the feedback:In your letter, you should tell: • when the party was • why it was s 61
- You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.In your letter, you should:give details of booksay why you need this booktell how you will pay for it. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41085271318 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95773056966 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624031007752 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7614121497 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.111111111 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149310160721 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548661271524 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532785515588 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867583337151 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267937223389 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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