The bar graph given illustrates the number of houses percentage wise that were either in rented or owned accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.
Overall, it can be observed that the households that were in rented accommodation experienced a decrease in their numbers over the given period of 93 years. Whereas those of the households in owned accommodation experienced a steady rise ultimately decreasing by a slight percentage in the end.
In 1918, the percentage of houses that were rented was the highest at around 78%, whilst that of the houses owned was comparitively very low at about 22%. This trend, where there is a relatively larger difference in the percentage of houses owned and rented can be observed till 1961, where households rented were at about 59% and those owned were at about 41%.
In the year 1971, households both owned and rented were exactly at 50%. From then on, the number of houses that were rented experienced a steady growth, with the highest percentage being approximately 69% in 2001 and finally reducing to around 64% in 2011. Contrary to this, the households that were rented experienced a decrease in its numbers with its lowest point at about 31% in 2001 and slightly increasing to about 36% in 2011.
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 67
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bers over the given period of 93 years. Whereas those of the households in owned accomm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91549295775 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75640036138 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464788732394 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5391462343 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278859313321 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152430330729 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632583523981 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206180846893 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556347918872 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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