In the contemporary world, where flight journey is becoming popular, a few people state that travel through air must be refrained as they are contributing a lot of pollution as well as using up the worlds fuel. I strongly disagree with this statement. Let me jot down the reasons why I think so.
Firstly, the air transport had made people from two ends of the world meet in a shorter span of time. For instance, a person from America can reach India in about 24 hours. Secondly, it provides employment to many people in different ways such as a pilot, air hostess and airport staff. Finally, in this globalized world where there are many business which are running remotely has benefited because they can travel around the world find a cheap place for their establishment and run business from there. It is a matter of just a few hours of travel for them.
The transportation of good from one part of the world to another part of the world has become more convenient. For example, a person eating at a restaurant in east London can order for dish made of fresh fish from India. In addition, the transport of a demise person's body reach their near ones abroad is also made easy when compared to previous era.
The people on the other hand state that though there are only a few people travel through air, it is causing a humongous pollution. Additionally, the planes also are consuming a lot of fuel hence they should be restricted.
In conclusion, though there are a very few demerits of allowing people travel on flight, the merits over weigh them. Hence I strongly agree that no such restrictions should be mandated.
- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:-Explain your situation-Describe your problems-Tell him/her when you think you can start 73
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'humongous pollution'.
Suggestion: humongous pollution
...eople travel through air, it is causing a humongous pollution. Additionally, the planes also are cons...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... on flight, the merits over weigh them. Hence I strongly agree that no such restricti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68641114983 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57761076621 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.666842105 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240207951611 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736115227533 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684213199244 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140422157147 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672047631725 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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